some of yall were freshmen in high school when i used to be active here! its crazy how time flies, though i shouldnt be surprised since ive been here for six years and all shshdhdhsd
I still can't get over the eyes though, and the red touches add a very interesting touch.
Overall, I think this is one of my favorite pieces out of your work!
I'm not sure if you used a ref for this or not, but I'd recommend adding more contrast for the shadows, especially in the dress as it fades into the background a bit too much. It also makes the shadow on the elbow look a bit weird; if there was more contrast, I think the elbow would look fine...
Frick this is so good #CielOfApproval #DemOldMemesThough
The face is perfect as far as I can tell--what stands out to me the most are how striking yet still very realistic the eyes look, as well as how great the cheekbones look--not too close to the ear or too far away.
FRICKLE FRACK PEOPLE ARE STILL HERE I AM THE SURPRISE
Thank you as well! I wasn't offended at all actually, I was just curious cause I like critique. :v
And ye that would make sense, I do tend to ramble. I was hoping it'd come off more artistically in my writing though? I know I rambled on...
Whoa there are still people who read this??
Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it, but what do you mean by the Wall of Text? Is the story itself too long, are the chapters too long, am I too verbose...? :00 I'm not entirely sure what you mean.
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