Wow, one of these days, I'll release something on time... I'll have the new chapter friday, and the 2nd chapter will be rebuilt tommorow, if you keep an eye on it.
Eh, however long it takes; I sometimes write three chapters in a week and sometimes take months before I start back up. Just one quick note; try to keep from posting non-story material in the chapters; you should put that in a comment. Nice job though...
I have finally found time to continue this, I will be making more chapters. First one should come out today...for the people who requested to be tagged, @Bryce's Games
First off, that's just how forums work. Sorry to hear that you can't take one minute out of your day to make an account. Secondly, is this really so important that you feel that you need to refund the game? A lot of work went into making this game, and just because they add mainstream controller...
I must say, your writing is improving a lot. I would revise it and help you there, but I am off to bed! Maybe tomorrow, if I can find the time......perhaps I should get back to my story as well......
No problem! I am always glad to be of help. Would you like me to give feedback after you post chapters? Also, don't worry about copying; it was your story, I just morphed it a bit; it's still truly yours.
I love this story. I have still been reading it, and keeping up with it, even after I posted on here last. The only recommendation that I would give is to give it more structure and work on your grammar. The story itself would be very hard pressed to be better.
Anyway, enough blabber. I revised...
These are great entries! Honestly, it would probably work better if each entry had it's own spoiler, because that way people with slow connections can look at them one at a time.
Noone.....it was a reference to doctor who
The cybermen say delete when a person can't be turned into a cyberman
I should probably get rid of that before people misinterpret that
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