The lore being communicated isn't bad, though perhaps less reliance on the relatively shallow game mechanics to form the basis of it would enrich it more.
That being said, your method of writing definitely needs work, the use of present tense doesn't lend itself very well to a story telling...
For a self reported "noob", these look great. I've tried my hand at pixel art before and have found it to be depressingly difficult. Like how the Blight Scythe looks like a leaf as well. Belies the biohazard theme I assume your mod is centered around.
So, as far as I can tell, Bub here went spelunking until he found 10 heart crystals, a gold key that a hallucination dropped him which then showed him the way to the only other person on the island.
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