A weird and wonderful world

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@realicraft
Location: same
Story:“1.good you understand.
2.What is an earth?
3. To put it simply you died and then were reborn”

@tappaja100
Location: you know
Story: “err I coulda worded dat better… err ta put it simply ya died and then werr chosen ta not die so ya werr reborn”

@TheGuy
Location: yep
Story: “yes the god of intellect”
 
I exit the caves, looking for enemies.
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And wondering why Person999 isn't taking my advice about re-doing the story to avoid later confusion and complaints.
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Sigh...
I can turn
'You are what people call a chosen one where you were chosen by the gods demons or humans to live forever, awoken from a deep slumber to fight, or help, an ancient evil worse than anything fathomable so GO GREAT HERO AND SAVE THIS WORLD (named salakor) FROM THIS EVIL'
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'You are what people call a chosen one, someone who was chosen by the gods, demons or humans of Salakor to live forever, awoken from a deep slumber to fight, or help, an ancient evil, worse than anything fathomable. So GO GREAT HERO AND SAVE THIS WORLD FROM THE ANCIENT EVIL.'
 
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That was the exact problem I had with doing it, because that sounds well, bad, just bad. It doesn’t go into context well.
Sorry
 
Ok then
FIVE
95 turns​
@realicraft
Location:dead, like DEAD, dead
Story: some random obliteration laser of death obliterates him obliteratingly

@tappaja100
Location:you know where
Story:“errm lets just ser dat it wuz my great, great, great, great, great, great, great, great, great, great, great, great, great, great, great, grandfather who chose you”

@TheGuy
Location: durpa derp
Story: “oh so you doubt that I’m a god, heh heh… well, FOOLISH HUMAN YOU HAVE NO IDEA WHAT YOU ARE DEALING WITH, I DON’T WANT TO FEEL SUDDENLY INCLINED TO TAKE YOUR LIFE, and for the question it’s because I chose you of course.
 
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