Poetry Bisharp's Personal Poetry Parlor

Are you not entertained?

  • Yes Bisharp, you've done it again!

    Votes: 41 70.7%

  • Who are you?

    Votes: 6 10.3%

  • It could use some work...

    Votes: 1 1.7%

  • I'm only here for the Pokemon references.

    Votes: 10 17.2%
  • Total voters
    58
@Scironex
Transition
Weather warming up
The flora wakes in color
Spring has shown itself

I think I did I right? I'm not very good.

Anyway;
Haiku
This manner of poem I pale at
Better works have come from a rat
But I gave it a shot
Though it wasn't too hot
Too little space for my wandering thoughts
Although through them some explain lots
I have not that manner of thinking
The idea of haikus has me sinking
Maybe if I hone my writing
The thought of haikus can be exciting
But until then
Regular poems are my den
 
I think @Baconfry is deserving of a poem
Sizzle and crackle of bacon sweet
The scrumptious scent of the meat
Wafts over the forums in heavenly draft
Made from Baconfry's heavenly craft
Cooking up a forum sensation
Legendary Baconfry of our generation
Master of Likes I dub his name
Yet there is more to his claim to fame
Drawing, banter, and lewd
All wrap up to include
The wonderful person, Baconfry
For whom I would probably die
 
TheQuietBisharp said:
@Scironex
Transition
Weather warming up
The flora wakes in color
Spring has shown itself

I think I did I right? I'm not very good.

Anyway;
Haiku
This manner of poem I pale at
Better works have come from a rat
But I gave it a shot
Though it wasn't too hot
Too little space for my wandering thoughts
Although through them some explain lots
I have not that manner of thinking
The idea of haikus has me sinking
Maybe if I hone my writing
The thought of haikus can be exciting
But until then
Regular poems are my den
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You did it right. Starting a line with "the" is generally considered poor practice, but that's a silly criticism.(If you're wondering, I would have used the line: "Flora waking in color," but whatever.)
 
Scironex said:
You did it right. Starting a line with "the" is generally considered poor practice, but that's a silly criticism.(If you're wondering, I would have used the line: "Flora waking in color," but whatever.)
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I'll keep that in mind. I also realized I used "heavenly" twice in Baconfry's poem, so I still have much to learn.
 
*begins madly twitching and foaming at the mouth* Hoik! HOIK! Hoik. HOOIIIIIK.
Hoik
Sweat wiped from brow
The hard work begins now
We must Hoik the world!
So we may be hurled
From jungle to sea
And the giant Living Wood tree
Zip and zoom
Like a typhoon
With a bug not meant to exist
Red says slamming a fist
But he sees the fun to be had
To remove such a feature would be bad
Embraced by all the Hoik became
Such a weird word this bug be named
Yet its quirks make it memorable
Stuck in my brain, it's inevitable

@ajidot, I had to.
 
TheQuietBisharp said:
*begins madly twitching and foaming at the mouth* Hoik! HOIK! Hoik. HOOIIIIIK.
Hoik
Sweat wiped from brow
The hard work begins now
We must Hoik the world!
So we may be hurled
From jungle to sea
And the giant Living Wood tree
Zip and zoom
Like a typhoon
With a bug not meant to exist
Red says slamming a fist
But he sees the fun to be had
To remove such a feature would be bad
Embraced by all the Hoik became
Such a weird word this bug be named
Yet its quirks make it memorable
Stuck in my brain, it's inevitable

@ajidot, I had to.
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Hoiks are hoiking all around this forum now lolololol
I love this!
Such masterpiece
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I HAVE to put this in my signature
 
Hello, I would like to request a poem, if possible, about a hawk who is highly intelligent and a ruthless killer who protects his master's mansion from anyone, and has the power to manipulate ice.
Its name is Petshop.
 
Virtuous Wanderer said:
Hello, I would like to request a poem, if possible, about a hawk who is highly intelligent and a ruthless killer who protects his master's mansion from anyone, and has the power to manipulate ice.
Its name is Petshop.
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I hope to get to your request soon, I've been quite busy with baseball and school.

Anyone can drop some requests to, I'll work on them in one burst.
 
@Virtuous Wanderer
The hail falls
In the mansion a party balls
A screech breaks the night's silence
A dark shape jumps the fence
A larger shadow flies above
A bird of prey, most definitely not a dove
Talons on skin
Red splatters on the snow layer thin
The hailstorm grows so to a blizzard
As the shape devours the gizzards
Of the foolish trespasser
The large bird at the party crasher
Known only at Petshop to the mansion owner
That is one family to not dishonor
 
Scironex said:
Mewtwo. STAT. Please.
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Hehe, I see you added the please.

DNA of Mew
Spliced untrue
To create a beast of unturned power
Never would they imagine that blood would shower
Psychic strength that shocked the world
And with a fill of his hand curled
Pokémon fell at his will
No types could hurt it, not burns or chill
Not iron, or shadow, or water, or electric
All under this thing's thumb
Mind so sharp it couldn't miss a crumb
Resides in a cave of Cerulean sheen
The creature's mind stayed keen
Although Mega Y looks like a handbag
Losing to Mewtwo shan't be blamed on lag
 
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