Story Cthulhu's World - Terraria

Chapter Thirty - Sorrow

I didn't feel bad.
I didn't really care.
I knew that he was going to be revived by my magic.
So the lose was nothing.

But.
He.
He devoted his life into his skeletons.
His WHOLE life.
He wanted them to be known as people to.
He wanted them to walk among humans.
As friends.
He knew they weren't a harm to anybody.
The were just like humans, if not better.
He even made progress.
Nine skeletons where accepted into normal society becuase of him..
Skellington, Bones Mcgee, Gloomy Mays, Jack Skellington, Billy Marrows, Tom, Rattles Magoo, Mandible Calavera, And No-Eyed Willy.
There could of been more if it wasn't for me.

After the Skeletal head plummeted into the ground, The Human took one of his arm fragments.

Which is messed up.

Im going to go see if Cedric is still himself. Ill try and contact him again. I cant let the skeletons be hid forever, becuase of my mistakes.

Im going to let the Moon Lord take over until I contact Cedric.

Cthulhu.​
 
Chapter Thirty-One ~ The Mantion



Hello, this is the Moon lord this time. Cthulhu may have stated that previously.


You know what’s weird?

Watching this entire thing take place. The Human, is a weird one.

But you know what, so am I.


Ya know, everyone usually has a reason and rhyme to why they do the crazy things they do.


In some ways, I can't blame the Human. But, at the same time, he’s a monster.


I don’t know what to think of him honestly.


Unlike my brother, Cthulhu, I will state my opinions at the start, not just add on things. I will let you see what the Human does in peace. Youurrrr welcome.


Anyways, what the human did today, after the great fight between him and the Skeletron.


Cthulhu isn't the only one who watches you know. ;-D


What Happened


Quickly after killing the colossal skeletron, he wandered past the corpse, and leaped down the deep stairwell.


It was Dark, but not to dark to see. The walls and floor were tiles of deep blue, and surprisingly shiny, despite being a home to thousands of skeletons, which the Human, quickly found out.



The Human stumbled into a giant room, dowsed in spikes, and home to a shiny, golden chest.



But it was locked.


The Human had a look of sadness.

But quite quickly, that look turned into a look of surprise.

Three skeletons arose out of the staircase behind the chest, and appeared out of the darkness.


Despite most skeletons lacking any basic equipment, these ones wore bright, red armour.


They ran towards the Human at high speeds, enraged, knowing what he had done.


The Human panicked slightly, and fired his diamond staff at them.



Not quick enough.



One of the skeletons lunged onto The Human, causing him to drop to the ground.


Before this happens, his last bolt kills the previous two skeletons.



Panicking, The Human dug the staff in-between them, and pushed him away.

After getting the smallest bit of space, he tightened his grip and started to bludgeon the skeleton, leaving him in pieces.


Panting for air, the Human made his way onto his feet.


Dusting himself off and whizzing down a potion, he set forth, past the chest, and down the staircase.


The staircase came to a complete stop, and a large hole was what laid at the bottom.


The look of confusion flooded the Human’s face.


“Who the hell designed this place?”


He peeked down, to see the complete floor dowsed in spikes. And to make it worse, a giant, spike ball, chain thing, swung around it.




Who DID design that place?



But The Human simply pulled out his might grappling hook, and hopped down, firing it at the roof.


And then he jumped down to the edge of the room, where danger there was not.


But instead, a door.


The Human then took out his hand, and opened it.


And a look of horror flooded his face.

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Sorry for no post in over a week, i have been quite busy. Due to this, sorry if it feels slightly rushed.​
 
Just some critic:

The NPC's are human, or so they appear, yet you say there has been no humans ever there, and until you give a logical explanation, you are contradicting yourself. As well as that, if no humans were ever there, then how would he know Latin, a human language?

As for the writing style, you seem to use the words "Said" and "yelled" for speaking a lot, you could use this for more options: http://www.spwickstrom.com/said/

Also, you seem to use basic words quite a lot, may I suggest using this to vary your words to make the story more interesting: https://quizlet.com/47044321/200-well-spoken-alternatives-to-common-words-and-phrase-3-flash-cards/

And my only other suggestion is to make longer chapters, and to make them more often. The more you expand on your grammar the better.
I kind of have trouble with the story too because Cthulhu is supposed to be the immortal being of chaos and destruction from the H.P. Lovecraft novel "The call of Cthulhu". I know you`re trying to make your own story but Cthulhu=peace, It just doesn`t fit for me.
 
This is not H.P lovecraft. This is a different story. In terraria, it says that he is the brother of the moonlord. so it wouldnt make sence if one was good and one wasnt, atleast not in this case.

These are different stories. They will take different roles.

You can take it all you want, but this is my story. I am not going to completely change this just because H.P lovecraft does it differently.

You are not forced to read this story.
 
This is not H.P lovecraft. This is a different story. In terraria, it says that he is the brother of the moonlord. so it wouldnt make sence if one was good and one wasnt, atleast not in this case.

These are different stories. They will take different roles.

You can take it all you want, but this is my story. I am not going to completely change this just because H.P lovecraft does it differently.

You are not forced to read this story.
I know. I will give you this though, Even though I didn`t agree with Cthulhu being portrayed as a good guy, I did read through what you have so far and I think you still have storytelling skill.:) Maybe one of the other stories you posted will appeal to me better.
 
Thank you ^^

I havent got much in terms of otehr stories, but i have a postponed story in my description, you might like that one.​
 
Dear Diary ~ Entry Ten

There seems to be a man, who comes in and out, puting things in chests and taking them out. Everyone considers him a hero, but for what reason, is what I do not know.

While we are on the subject, chests. I can't open them. I just, can't! I cant open anything for that matter, besides doors. What use will that do me? How am I going to get resources?

My 'Friends' call me crazy for liking these skeleton things. Well, I think THEY'RE the crazy ones! Who doesn't like skeletons?

They keep talking about how the 'Hero' killed the 'Old Man' infront of the mantion. That was me.
The 'Hero' Killed ME.

I need to get out of here. Fast.

Although, even if i did leave it wouldn't do me any good. There isnt anything out there besdides skeletons for me.

It turns out that they also kill things like Zombies and Floating Eyes. Why, is all i could tihnk.

I am so confused. Instead of making friends they are like 'Oh, look, a being that isnt human, lets go kill it!". What is WRONG with people!


Feeling confused,

Cedric A. Lloyd






 
My ideas are running slim for the moment. So there mmay not be many posts for a while, and if there is, the gap between them will be big. But its either that, or i give you rushed, on-original uninteresting stories. I don''t want to give you that.

Sorry! I will try to get back into routine soon.

Cedric A. Lloyd
Doom0.​
 
Chapter Thirty Two – Exploring the Mansion


I take it back.


The Human IS a monster.

What happened:

Skeletons. At least Twenty of them.


One of them had a confused look on his face.

Some other ones started to whisper to each other.


Another skeleton, decided to walk up to the human.

He brought out his hand, in a gesture to shake.


But the Human Refused.

What did you expect?


The Human pulled out his staff, and fired

Again.

And again.

And Again.


Quite quickly, most of the skeletons where dead.

Most.


Suddenly, the remaining four lunged fourth, and attempted to grab at the Human.


Which, predictably, didn’t work.


Instead, the Human bludgeoned the first two, knocking there skulls off, and then jumped back, and fired thorns from his thing.


The Skeletons where no more.

Only crumpled pieces of bone were left behind.


The Human, proud of what he has done, walked through the doorway, to find a chest.


Of course locked.


With no hesitation, he turned back, leaned over a skeleton and took a key, which was hanging on a necklace.


And then opened the chest.


Inside, laid some sort of blade. It was slim, and shiny.


The Human took it and gave it a swing.


It was FAST!


And then he went through another door.


Killed more skeletons.


Another Door.


Got a key.


Another door.


Chest.


Another door.


Skeletons and keys.


It was like someone was pillaging through a defenseless village. Killing everything he saw, along with stealing everything else.



After over twenty-four hours, he left.


Why?


Because there was nothing left.


No skeleton alive.


No chest untouched.


Nothing.

Nothing at all.
 
I finally powered through writers block to pull this one off.

I am wondering, is there anyone still reading this? There isn't much point in writing if no one is reading it, eh?​
 
I finally powered through writers block to pull this one off.

I am wondering, is there anyone still reading this? There isn't much point in writing if no one is reading it, eh?​
I might not reply to this story, but I read every chapter in it, sooner or later.
 
Thanks ^^ it SHOULD be up soon.

I have school again, but the writers block has stopped for the most part. Im not sure what this will do for the writing upload times though.
 
Chapter Thirty Three - Throwback

My older brother Cthulhu told me that this might be the last chapter I make. So for those of you that miss him, he will be back.

Anyways, earlier Apparently the Human was making a hole. So he went back to that recently.

I am pretty comfused.

What happened:

The Human stared into a mirror and appeared home.

It was a long day for him, for he had just cleaned out the mantion. Entirely.

As he walked passed his 'friends', or what he called NPC's, the clothier gave him a cold stare.

He ignored this, although im not even sure if he noticed.

He walked out of his house, and down to the hole that he dug a while back.

He broke the sign he had made, which said 'In progress', and continued digging.

I couldn't help but wodner what he was looking for.

He dug for hours.

And left.

Well thats it for today.

Nothing interesting.

Heh. Im starting to rem-



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More chapters coming soon. Thats right, it isn't going to be a month for the next chapter! Wowie!
 
My Diary – Entry Eleven


The face thing in the sky, I saw it again today.

It told me all these things.

About How I was cursed.

About why I was cursed.


It was him. The face thing, he cursed me.

To kill a Human.


The same Human, that killed me.


Honestly, I can’t blame him.


These things the Human has apparently done,

Horrible!


But,

He ruined my life trying to do so.


Apparently the Human has killed all my skeletons.


Took all my stuff.


And looted every nook and cranny from my Mansion.


It was a true horror to hear these things.


After he explained it all to me, I went to my room.

Locked the door.

And cried.


It must’ve been hours.





I will kill this Human myself.


He has destroyed everything I have every done, my only friends, and has trapped my in this hellish life!


HE WILL DIE!


Enraged,


Cedric A. Lloyd
 
Chapter Thirty-Five – A New Enemy


Cthulhu’s Baaacccckkkk!


Did you miss me?

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The Human has finished the hole.


We were hoping to avoid this.


Upon finishing the hole,

He has reached hell.


I’m surprised it took me this long, to notice those intentions.



In hell, there is a demon.

An extremely powerful, demon.


He is known as, the ‘Wall of Flesh’.


This demon never emerges, without a sacrifice.

If only for a brief moment.


The Sacrifice?


One, Human, Soul.



The Human has started to build a bridge across al of hell, over lava and through houses.


Yes, houses.


These houses in hell, are they’re for one purpose.


They’re safe havens.


Incase, of attack.


The houses where here, because, well/

You wouldn’t expect an attacker to go all the way to hell, would you?


Much less, just to kill people.


Now do you see why this Human is a monster?


Our only hope is the demon.


But, at the same time, he will have to kill someone in order to get to him.


And, even so.


If the demon fails…



This world of terraria you have seen so far.

Is only half of it.


The other half is kept away through a pact which I made with the demon.


Become immortal.


But keep the rest of the world safe.


I did this pact, after the human killed Cedric.


Well, half killed him.


His immortality, is not what most people would call ‘immortal’.

If he dies, he will be reborn.


But if this demon dies once.


The other half of the world will be revealed to the human.


This demon, The ‘Wall of Flesh’, is our last hope.



 
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