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DarkReaperRising said:
Can you make me a poem (Me being death)
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Ok, reaper man.

A shadow swoops and sweeps
Over these grassy lands
Turning wood to ash
And grassy soil sand.
A skeletal void
That brings battles to their end
And dragging to the other side
Souls struggling to amend.
Devastation and entropy
Under one banner
Slinking through the dark
In a cheerful manner.
And holding it's eternal breath.
And as I walk through the valley
of the shadow of death


I Fear No Evil.
 
In the cast of JBA 4
Lies a rather strange chap.
To navigate his strange mind
You may need a map.
And his mind isn't the only thing
To weigh sanity's chains thin
Stand arrows avoid his body
Instead of piercing through his skin.

Apparently he's also a space alien
At least he tells everyone.
Is he legitimate? The real deal?
Or is it a lie made for fun?
And also his stand which is perfect
For situations incredibly dire
As he can become almost anything
Thanks to "Earth-Wind-and-Fire"
 
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Qui Devorat said:
In the cast of JBA 4
Lies a rather strange chap.
To navigate his strange mind
You may need a map.
And his mind isn't the only thing
To weigh sanity's chains thin
Stand arrows avoid his body
Instead of piercing through his skin.

Apparently he's also a space alien
At least he tells everyone.
Is he legitimate? The real deal?
Or is it a lie made for fun?
And also his stand which allows him
To become creatures landmade or finned
In fact he can become anything
Thanks to "Fire-Ice-Wind"
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This is great! Much appreciated, Qui Devorat. :)
But uh, there's no ice, it's Earth Wind and Fire. just to correct.
 
Qui Devorat said:
The crimson red.
Rivers of it around.
Covering the walls
Seeping into the ground.
And so, a corpse
Comes crashing on the floor
It's gushing, opened chest
Causing more red to pour.
A scythe wound, large and wide
The cause of his death
His only word "Reaper."
Being his final dying breath.
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Dat was fast and beutiful
 
I'm enjoying your poetry so far, and I have a request based on the backstory of my character.
Excession was a normal Terrarian, until he and his friend were exploring in the corruption. They found a spring of corrupted water that would provide long life, but at the cost of turning them evil. Excession's friend betrayed him, and he got stuck under a pile of rubble with his arm laying in the pool. The pool was covered, so his friend left, but it sustained Excession, turning him into a demon. He eventually gathered enough energy to break free, and take revenge.
He is now thousands of years old, and still tries to fight for good, even though he has been corrupted.
Sorry if it is long, you don't have to do it if you don't want to however.
 
excession said:
I'm enjoying your poetry so far, and I have a request based on the backstory of my character.
Excession was a normal Terrarian, until he and his friend were exploring in the corruption. They found a spring of corrupted water that would provide long life, but at the cost of turning them evil. Excession's friend betrayed him, and he got stuck under a pile of rubble with his arm laying in the pool. The pool was covered, so his friend left, but it sustained Excession, turning him into a demon. He eventually gathered enough energy to break free, and take revenge.
He is now thousands of years old, and still tries to fight for good, even though he has been corrupted.
Sorry if it is long, you don't have to do it if you don't want to however.
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So basically like backstory except I was dead when I was turned into a humanoid abomination?
Also a combination of hellish energy and dark energy was my "magic defibrillator."
 
Qui Devorat said:
So basically like backstory except I was dead when I was turned into a humanoid abomination?
Also a combination of hellish energy and dark energy was my "magic defibrillator."
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Basically, yep. The whole sustaining corrupting pond kept him alive
A backstory in poem form.
Eventually, when I'm done with my current Terraria Novel, I will turn that backstory into a sequel, but not quite a sequel, and have it extend afterwards...
 
excession said:
Basically, yep. The whole sustaining corrupting pond kept him alive
A backstory in poem form.
Eventually, when I'm done with my current Terraria Novel, I will turn that backstory into a sequel, but not quite a sequel, and have it extend afterwards...
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Ok.
Sorry for the damn enthusiasm in your character.
Yours looking like the Grim Reaper and my unglamoured look being pale with glowing green veins and glowing green eyes that exude tendrils of cursed fire.
Anyway, so let's get cracking shall we?
 
Qui Devorat said:
Ok.
Sorry for the damn enthusiasm in your character.
Yours looking like the Grim Reaper and my unglamoured look being pale with glowing green veins and glowing green eyes that exude tendrils of cursed fire.
Anyway, so let's get cracking shall we?
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Sweet, thanks! I can't wait to read it!
Also, this is what he looks like...
Excession web..png
 
excession said:
He's free to move, but his demon powers are limited during the day, or in the hallowed biome.
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Huh.
I can move at any time of day, and any place. Although if I were to walk into the church or into the hallow, my considerable healing factor would be dulled.
That demonic-corruption cocktail may have me brought me back as a horror in human flesh, but I am also something much different from corruption and the denizens of hell.
A blend, you could say.
That's why, that despite holy things nulling my regen factor, it doesn't affect anything else.

ANYWAY ENOUGH BLATHERING ON MY PART.
TIME TO GET DESE HANDS WORKIN.
XD
 
Qui Devorat said:
Huh.
I can move at any time of day, and any place. Although if I were to walk into the church or into the hallow, my considerable healing factor would be dulled.
That demonic-corruption cocktail may have me brought me back as a horror in human flesh, but I am also something much different from corruption and the denizens of hell.
A blend, you could say.
That's why, that despite holy things nulling my regen factor, it doesn't affect anything else.

ANYWAY ENOUGH BLATHERING ON MY PART.
TIME TO GET DESE HANDS WORKIN.
XD
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:D
That was entertaining.
(Also, he's a demon, so he has dark powers besides long life, but he'd prefer to be human again...)
I just realized this thread has turned into a long conversation about my avatar.:)

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