I like it!Does anyone have any thoughts on the intro I wrote? i've been trying to improve my creative writing skills.
Clarification: When I ask for feedback, I want criticism. I need people to tell me what I did WRONG.I like it!
Good luck!I have to get off the forums for a while, working on an English final. Please, for the love of my grade, don't RP here
Good luck!I have to get off the forums for a while, working on an English final. Please, for the love of my grade, don't RP here
I’m still legally on break (although I have nothing better to do but be here anyway)Uh by the way
I can RP here today
Not right now
But later today
have her come to the cockpittank you, kind sir
How do you recommend I get Everest back in action?
One sec I need to read up on the Ic threadNice. How do we plan to continue?
this messageThartler just glares at Halt. "Look, as far as I know, that could also be just a repair the engine or 'thing' powering that ship, with nothing dangerous."
Halt rolls eyes at the naivety of the ranger. "Ya' think they rivals care ship no sail? Ta' ship a target amid seas."
Oop. Thartler meant that it could just be a 'repair the engine and nothing else' mission.Ok have read up, I'd just like some clarification on what you mean in
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Especially "that" in Thartler's line
And I honestly have no idea what Hart is saying
That's fineOop. Thartler meant that it could just be a 'repair the engine and nothing else' mission.
Halt is just Halt, they are bringing in a case where the 'rivals' (pirates/brigands/highwaymen) would be first to the ship and wouldn't care about it being a ship without sails (or engines as modern person would say)
To be fair, should've clarified first.