KangarooGuy
Steampunker
So before I start this 7 Chapter long story, I should say that this is my first story, so don't expect good results. The Hunk of Metal is basically a Mechanical counterpart of the WoF that I suggested, which was hated by a lot of people. Anyway, let's start!
-----Chapter 1: A New Beginning...-----
One time, in a country called Grassden, there was a man named George. He was a young person raised by his grandparents. One day, George told his grandparents:
After that, he went on a journey to his parents' house.
-----Chapter 2: The Journey to Lengarin-----
When George was heading over to his parents' house, he looked at his map. His grandfather said one day:
-----Chapter 3: The Rumbles-----
George arrived at his house and said:
Then, George head to the blacksmith to make a weapon.
-----Chapter 4: Preparations-----
-----Chapter 1: A New Beginning...-----
One time, in a country called Grassden, there was a man named George. He was a young person raised by his grandparents. One day, George told his grandparents:
Grandmother, Grandfather... I have to leave Grassden to see my parents.
his Grandmother said.Why, you have told us a hundred times regarding that.
said George.Wait, you actually counted how many times, grandmother?
said George's grandmother angrily.Enough with the chitchat! Today is the day you're going to see your parents!
Okay, then... I will return once I have done what's need to be done there.
said his grandparents.Goodbye, my lovely grandson!
said George.See you someday again, you both! Goodbye!
After that, he went on a journey to his parents' house.
-----Chapter 2: The Journey to Lengarin-----
When George was heading over to his parents' house, he looked at his map. His grandfather said one day:
So George followed the map to Lengarin. He had to cross deserts, cities and much, much more.Your parents live in Lengarin. A lot of people live there. You have to leave Grassden to get there, though.
said George panting. He then continued on his journey. George then stayed in an Inn for a night. When he woke up, he got his belongings, and left to continue his journey. He looked at his map, and it appears that he has arrived at Lengarin. However, he doesn't know where his parents live. He recalled something from his grandmother:How did mother and father walk such a distance?
But he asked himself:Dear, your parents live in the city of Hadsel in a house with a brown roof.
He asked one of the city guards where his mother and father were. Surprisingly, that guard was George's dad!Which house? I better ask the city guards.
George said.Dad?!
Yes, George. It's me, your father.
But where's mother?
Oh, your mother? She is at the house.
I'm gonna go to her. See you later, father!
-----Chapter 3: The Rumbles-----
George arrived at his house and said:
said George weeping tears of joy.Mother!
George! Where's your father? Have you seen him?
and then the ground started shaking.Yes, I have seen father. He is at the city entra--
said George surprised.What was that?!
Oh no, the legend might be true....
What legend, mother?
It's the legend of a big wall of metal. The Hunk of Metal.
Do you have a picture that can show me what it looks like?
and George's mother showed him this:Yes, I do. Have a look at this.
said George.That looks... Unusual.
Indeed, it does. This creature has been causing the quakes.
said George with a furious face.Then I have to get a weapon. A sword that can defeat this creature.
Then you could head over to the Weapon Shop or save some coins and make one instead.
I'd rather make my own. Where should I go?
Head to the blacksmith. There, you will be able to make your own weapons.
Alright, goodbye, mother!
Goodbye!
Then, George head to the blacksmith to make a weapon.
-----Chapter 4: Preparations-----
Hello there, you must be the blacksmith.
Yes, I am. Have you come here to create a weapon?
said George in an eager manner.Yes! I have!
Okay then, but you have to find a few materials i'm missing.
What is it, sir?
I need wood for a handle, a bit of Gold, Copper and Tungsten.
I must head over to the mine, correct?
Yes, you are correct. However, you might need one of this.
A pickaxe? Just what I needed!
Alright then, come back when you have the materials.
And after that, George head over to the mine to get some resources.Goodbye, sir!
said George, panting.Phew.
There, George saw a familiar looking face.Here I am, at the mind.
Mr. Blacksmith? How did you get here?!
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