Qui Devorat's poetry corner.
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Qui Devorat
Terrarian
But outside of the fact
That this was fun
Do you admit
That I got you on the run?
RainbowDrago
Plantera
A:sure
B:I'm going to have rhyming dreams
Qui Devorat
Terrarian
Qui Devorat
Terrarian
For @Bucket o' Water
There he stands
For he's accomplished his mission
As usually his contents
Are used to cool Fission
But he sometimes fails
At where he's sent
Like darthmorf's nuclear reactor
Everyone knows how that went
But before it blew up a city
And cost more than you could afford
You decided to #TakeASelfie
For the record.
He's everyone's favourite water pail
Being the postman
Doing his tasks without fail.
From starting up to the bottom
For he's @Bucket o' Water
He's a lovable rogue
Just remember that he can falter
But his bucket appearance is vogue.
There he stands
For he's accomplished his mission
As usually his contents
Are used to cool Fission
But he sometimes fails
At where he's sent
Like darthmorf's nuclear reactor
Everyone knows how that went
But before it blew up a city
And cost more than you could afford
You decided to #TakeASelfie
For the record.
He's everyone's favourite water pail
Being the postman
Doing his tasks without fail.
From starting up to the bottom
For he's @Bucket o' Water
He's a lovable rogue
Just remember that he can falter
But his bucket appearance is vogue.
Bucket
Terrarian
If one word posts were allowed, then I would of just posted "Yes.". Thank you, I'm LMAO, this is great.
[EDIT] When I can get on my PC, could I put that in my signature?
Qui Devorat
Terrarian
Nothing better than satisfying customers.
*Pulls out a cloth and starts cleaning the bar*
Qui Devorat
Terrarian
For @darthmorf
Here comes the famous four
Each with a famous name
Hitting the dance floor
And setting it aflame
Out come the extinguishers
But are they really to blame?
For there's a dansen plague
Sweeping the far land
Causing the infected's feet
To emit large amounts of heat
Enough to make glass from sand.
But I think the temperature
Is caused by their dansen
But no one knows for sure
The first to fall
Was @Milt69466
Who's a fan of the idea
"Everything hammers can fix."
And the next to fall (I think)
Was @Sodapone
Infected in the time taken to blink
And next to go along
The unstealable. The unstoppable.
Go ahead. Try it. But first tell your friends
That you might not come back at all
For he is Mr Anti-Thief
The almighty, the infected @ppowersteef
And @darthmorf might be working
On a rather effective vaccine
But he was infected too
So it could have been.
And these days they dance in place
Enjoying it with obvious glee
but they are highly contagious
To another City, one must flee.
Here comes the famous four
Each with a famous name
Hitting the dance floor
And setting it aflame
Out come the extinguishers
But are they really to blame?
For there's a dansen plague
Sweeping the far land
Causing the infected's feet
To emit large amounts of heat
Enough to make glass from sand.
But I think the temperature
Is caused by their dansen
But no one knows for sure
The first to fall
Was @Milt69466
Who's a fan of the idea
"Everything hammers can fix."
And the next to fall (I think)
Was @Sodapone
Infected in the time taken to blink
And next to go along
The unstealable. The unstoppable.
Go ahead. Try it. But first tell your friends
That you might not come back at all
For he is Mr Anti-Thief
The almighty, the infected @ppowersteef
And @darthmorf might be working
On a rather effective vaccine
But he was infected too
So it could have been.
And these days they dance in place
Enjoying it with obvious glee
but they are highly contagious
To another City, one must flee.
Great! This is going straight into our social forum!
ppowersteef
Paladin
I'm really enjoying those poems
Qui Devorat
Terrarian
Pirtz
Terrarian
In the pits of lurking
I end my rest
So: alea jacta est
I'll put my skill to the test.
As I can see, your mastery,
Is the note-lacking melody;
So could you, with a bit of time
Judge the quality of my rhyme?
I'm not quite inspired,
For I'm actually tired,
Five hours of sleep
Being rather steep.
Is this poetry, or crap
Much like most of today's rap?
I just want to know
If I have anything I could here show.
I end my rest
So: alea jacta est
I'll put my skill to the test.
As I can see, your mastery,
Is the note-lacking melody;
So could you, with a bit of time
Judge the quality of my rhyme?
I'm not quite inspired,
For I'm actually tired,
Five hours of sleep
Being rather steep.
Is this poetry, or crap
Much like most of today's rap?
I just want to know
If I have anything I could here show.
Qui Devorat
Terrarian
It has a leaning
Towards well-meaning
But keep into account
The meaning and amount
Nonsensical droning
Or outright moaning
is simple to produce
But a foul-tasting juice.
Pirtz
Terrarian
My poem parts aren't quite joint;
Maybe I should get faster to the point?
Also, is metric important?
Syllables are painful to count.
Oh, so I moan? You mean I should repeat the same thing less? That was mostly an advise requesting poem, so these can get quite dull.
Qui Devorat
Terrarian
I'm sorry if I'm not helping you, it's easier for some people (or POEple) but not in others.
Your poems aren't exactly total trash. So in my opinion, you're in the green zone.
stormconure
Duke Fishron
My story of how i joined my club. Ahem,
One day Red was oh so kind,
To mess with our inquisitive minds.
"Slime is falling from the sky!"
A spoiler. Red is very sly.
The spoiler caused a massive brawl
Between seven terrarians who wanted badly
For Redigit to spoil all.
But no more was said from him, sadly.
The seven left but were still mad.
Later that evening they all had
A fight that seemed to have no end.
They formed coarse allinaces, not quite friends.
They soon realized their fight was for naught.
Then one of them thought
They should join forces, argue no more
And fight for fun till they were sore.
So since then that's how it's been.
Terrarians fighting to no end,
But their fight is not crime or sin.
They still remain the best of friends.
Jeez, this topic has so many possibilities for poems... What is that, like my 5th one?
One day Red was oh so kind,
To mess with our inquisitive minds.
"Slime is falling from the sky!"
A spoiler. Red is very sly.
The spoiler caused a massive brawl
Between seven terrarians who wanted badly
For Redigit to spoil all.
But no more was said from him, sadly.
The seven left but were still mad.
Later that evening they all had
A fight that seemed to have no end.
They formed coarse allinaces, not quite friends.
They soon realized their fight was for naught.
Then one of them thought
They should join forces, argue no more
And fight for fun till they were sore.
So since then that's how it's been.
Terrarians fighting to no end,
But their fight is not crime or sin.
They still remain the best of friends.
Jeez, this topic has so many possibilities for poems... What is that, like my 5th one?
Even when people think he's the man in the hat,
So full of praise, is our Qui Devorat.
Pirtz
Terrarian
Actually, what I had asked,
Was if the green zone I passed.
I am thankful to know, anyway
That despite not having much to say,
My poems still tend to be gray.
That way I'll know when to stop
Since my poetry's not... top.
It's an encouragement just shown,
To visit other things unknown.
Qui Devorat
Terrarian
When I was one of the small
I was looked down by all
But my potential eventually
Had time to shine
And when they disregarded me
I bluntly said "Fine"
And now I wander among the forums
With hat, jacket and jeans
Or I patiently wait for requests
But this iconic image, me it means
The poetic crusader, corrupted in a hat
For that is the image of @Qui Devorat
Qui Devorat
Terrarian
The Stars open up the hearts
Of any aspiring astronomer
But they simply place the suggestion there
The rest is your doing.
For by letting itself be seen
It casts upon you a moonlit night
That is eternal
For every lover's lane.
So hold your dear ones close
As well as the special one
You want to spend your life with.
Until the end
Your soul mate.
When it comes to love
The celestials will give you
All the time in the world.
Just remember to use it.
Of any aspiring astronomer
But they simply place the suggestion there
The rest is your doing.
For by letting itself be seen
It casts upon you a moonlit night
That is eternal
For every lover's lane.
So hold your dear ones close
As well as the special one
You want to spend your life with.
Until the end
Your soul mate.
When it comes to love
The celestials will give you
All the time in the world.
Just remember to use it.