An airship that i made in some spare time

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Pio21

Terrarian
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Yup, just wanted to share it with you guys.
Any criticism is welcome and appreciated.
 
That is absolutely amazing, also wondering, what background wall did you use for the sail?
 
Cyrman said:
That is absolutely amazing, also wondering, what background wall did you use for the sail?
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Glad you think it's good. The sails are made of... well, sails. I thought to change them to some colored gemsparks, but those just have a better texture.
 
The balloon looks kinda derpy. The rest is great though.

Maybe you can add more details to the balloon? Railing and fixes or whatever?
 
Freenight said:
The balloon looks kinda derpy. The rest is great though.

Maybe you can add more details to the balloon? Railing and fixes or whatever?
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agreed. the balloon needs more detailing, even if it were just some shading

all that flat white just looks....plain


IDEA: try adding more "ribs" of wood to it, to break up the white patches and also give more of a sense of roundness to it
 
Demogarose said:
agreed. the balloon needs more detailing, even if it were just some shading

all that flat white just looks....plain


IDEA: try adding more "ribs" of wood to it, to break up the white patches and also give more of a sense of roundness to it
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Thanks for the feedback! I've been planing to add details to the balloon, similiar design as the front of the ship. I also planned to add some ropes hanging on the side, but i was unsure how that would look. Shading is good idea, i might do that.
 
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