The whole tree thing is precisely what I was mentioning in my post. Just thought it was intriguing you specified. Also "not too much" is an opinion and not factual. Something engaging and involving to a reader doesn't have to be detailed so extensively. I assume that is already present information to you. This is an overused ideology circulating around texts but I shall use it any way: Too much detail stops the reader from painting their own mental image. It hinders the ability to think critically or positively of character decisions and the narrative itself. Keep in mind this is my opinion and is subject to total disbelief.Not all trees in the land of fiction are wooden, actually, there can perfectly be loads of different tree types. As well as that, I added enough description for the reader to be engaged and so they could picture the sene, but not too much. My opinion is that you are not used to this level/quantity of description, and your judgement is therefore stirred in the wrong way. Thanks for the feedback, though.
ThanksSure, I'll have you tagged for the next chapter, don't you worry.
I think you might want to make is say; and night began to spread across the skies.When five hours passed, and night became to spread across the skies, Bluebeard began to grow tired and went to head back home.