Qui Devorat's poetry corner.

Amazing! There is no word to describe how incredible this is! I also wrote a sort of continuation of the poem...

So it was time to whisk away the night...
Although it put up a large fight,
As it was still filled with the sounds of the party,
It still echoing the sounds of drums deep into space,
Everyone on the ground was asleep, scattered around, except one,
Qui devorat, the lord and master of poetry never slept, he was never done,
The party had only been half the fun,
As he sat on his throne, and thought and thought of a poem worthy of the festivity,
To most people it would seem impossible but this was qui, the lord of creativity,
After not long he sat and laughed at masterpiece he had created,
He couldn't wait to see the look on people's faces...
 
Sorry Crimson conflict fans
For I've got writer's block
But this shepherd has ways
That he can entertain his flock.
Why do you think
I call myself a Poetry Lord?
Making poems out of a whim
Out of my own accord.

But my question is to you: A poetry for yourself?
Well you needn't go far
To go to my request bar
Who knows. It might be good for your health.
But otherwise regardless
If you're a bystander or poetry enthusiast
Come to my poetry corner
And any unhappiness you experience has passed
And you leave with a renewed resolve
For I'm like a detective
Your case I will solve.
 
For @agent_alx
Here he comes
With a fast pace
Swinging a flairon
Which he aims at your face
Any cretin who gets in his path
Will not survive the destructive swath
That he cuts like a blade
Into the skin of the ground
For this he was made
He's like nothing around
Not a good idea to give him a vex
Don't antagonise @agent_alx
For as a worthy opponent
To the Lunar waves
He'll receive tons of gratitude
From the world he saves.
 
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Qui Devorat said:
For @agent_alx
Here he comes
With a fast pace
Swinging a flairon
Which he aims at your face
Any cretin who gets in his path
Will not survive the destructive swath
That he cuts like a blade
Into the skin of the ground
For this he was made
He's like nothing around
Not a good idea to give him a vex
Don't antagonise @agent_alx
For as a worthy opponent
To the Lunar waves
He'll receive tons of gratitude
From the world he saves.
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Perfection.
 
For @darthmorf
Time for @darthmorf's Swiggity swag
For he has got this in the bag!
Winning a car competition
Has given him his fill
In the gracious form
Of the Darthmobile
A scientific car
Powered by electricity
Although an experiment with it
Destroyed an entire city.
He has vats of home brew
In the back and in the trunk.
But has to wear a gas mask
For by the Gods it stunk!
The chrome dashboard
Holds a secret folder
Along with research into
An efficient cup holder
For the brew he makes
Burns through them
Powerful stuff it is although
toxic to the brainstem
Which I think is the cause
Of him being wacky
Just hope he reverses the damage
Before it grows into being tacky.
 
Qui Devorat said:
For @darthmorf
Time for @darthmorf's Swiggity swag
For he has got this in the bag!
Winning a car competition
Has given him his fill
In the gracious form
Of the Darthmobile
A scientific car
Powered by electricity
Although an experiment with it
Destroyed an entire city.
He has vats of home brew
In the back and in the trunk.
But has to wear a gas mask
For by the Gods it stunk!
The chrome dashboard
Holds a secret folder
Along with research into
An efficient cup holder
For the brew he makes
Burns through them
Powerful stuff it is although
toxic to the brainstem
Which I think is the cause
Of him being wacky
Just hope he reverses the damage
Before it grows into being tacky.
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XD lol
I imagine that poem being rapped, and its beautiful!
 
For @DryCryCrystal
Too much ale
I think you had
If you're tripping
Then it's gone bad
For people added a shroom
To their ale
To give it that "ZOOM
Into a fantasy market
Full of legendary wares
But just as soon as you arrive
It becomes a place of nightmares
The stalls closing down
Locking their doors
For here he comes
The anomaly on two paws
With a hook on his hand
Stalking you wherever you go
That is on dry land
For it is @DryCryCrystal
Here to trouble you to suicide
So bring a bullet and a pistol
And before he kills you kill yourself
Relief from the torture once and for all
When the police find you
They'll think you're a thug
Having shot himself under the influence
Of a cocktail of drugs.
 
For @Milt69466

Here comes Helena
With her bone crushing hammer
I think a hospital or a morgue
Would be a good place to refer
After a run with Ms Hammertime
Cos she will break your body
Starting with your spine.
For she's a surgeon of the Hammer of War
Whacking heads off like a golf club
The only thing missing is "Fore!"
She searches for a worthy opponent
To grind to a paste
So if you're fighting her
Better get smart post-haste
For quick thinking is a thing to require
Otherwise you're gonna quickly expire
For she's fast as a train
And hits like one
Bringing agonising injury and pain.
So unless you know a place to hide
Don't get on Helena's bad side.
 
Qui Devorat said:
For @Milt69466

Here comes Helena
With her bone crushing hammer
I think a hospital or a morgue
Would be a good place to refer
After a run with Ms Hammertime
Cos she will break your body
Starting with your spine.
For she's a surgeon of the Hammer of War
Whacking heads off like a golf club
The only thing missing is "Fore!"
She searches for a worthy opponent
To grind to a paste
So if you're fighting her
Better get smart post-haste
For quick thinking is a thing to require
Otherwise you're gonna quickly expire
For she's fast as a train
And hits like one
Bringing agonising injury and pain.
So unless you know a place to hide
Don't get on Helena's bad side.
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Have all my yes
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