Weapons & Equip Items that could use a resprite

Your eaters have far to high a color contrast. They look fake.
 
bigger teeth + more teeth = looks less threatening = what?
It makes the rest of it small by comparison.
Also:
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You have most certainly pinched the back.
Also, you could just widen the mandibles already there.
The mouth area is fine.
 
Your eaters have far to high a color contrast. They look fake.
They're fictional creatures, they're supposed to look fake.
edit: AND they're sprites.
 
They're fictional creatures, they're supposed to look fake.
By fake, I did not mean fictional. I can't imagine it as a real creature, but the old ones I can.
 
I made the mandibles a bit less exaggerated and more jagged.
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It makes the rest of it small by comparison.
Also:
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You have most certainly pinched the back.
Also, you could just widen the mandibles already there.
The mouth area is fine.
since I really like what I did with the jaw, I just made the back bigger
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it's subject to improvement for personal standards, but I'm sure you would think this alone is still better than the midget version
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One of the things I like more about the original eater of worlds is that all it's eyes face forwards...
really? I think it would look cool artistically when they face the fourth wall.
 
since I really like what I did with the jaw, I just made the back bigger
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it's subject to improvement for personal standards, but I'm sure you would think this alone is still better than the midget version
IMO, that looks much better.
I could back that.
But something about it makes me prefer the other one.
I'm not sure what, though.
 
One of the things I like more about the original eater of worlds is that all it's eyes face forwards...
I agree, makes it look like it's hunting for you, not staring off into space.
 
I agree, makes it look like it's hunting for you, not staring off into space.
what I think would be better, but not necessarily viable, is if the eyes were counted a separate entities (just floating on top of the segment sprite) the point to this is so that they eyes can directly stare at you and keep vision locked on you.
 
Demon Scythe: At first I thought it was a neat thing where the middle of the book was deeper then the edges, then I realized that it was a scythe.
Cursed Flames: Fantastic.
Razorblade Typhoon: The blue is too bright.
Megashark: Great.
Phaseblade: The white is a bit too bright, make it redder.

Eater of Souls: Needs to be browner, make the mandibles less wide. Looks fine after the changes but it could be less purple.
Eater of Worlds: Needs to be browner.
Corrupter: Needs to be browner, make the mandibles less wide, make the green in the eye darker.

Red Slime: Why is it brownish-green?
Blue Slime: Why is there reddish-purple in the bottom left?
Green Slime: Needs to be less yellow, it looks like a Jungle Slime.
Black Slime: Fine.
what I think would be better, but not necessarily viable, is if the eyes were counted a separate entities (just floating on top of the segment sprite) the point to this is so that they eyes can directly stare at you and keep vision locked on you.
This.
 
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Eater of Souls: Needs to be browner, make the mandibles less wide. Looks fine after the changes but it could be less purple.
Eater of Worlds: Needs to be browner.
Corrupter: Needs to be browner, make the mandibles less wide, make the green in the eye darker.

Red Slime: Why is it brownish-green?
Blue Slime: Why is there reddish-purple in the bottom left?
Green Slime: Needs to be less yellow, it looks like a Jungle Slime.
Black Slime: Fine.
I feel like the purple hue suit the corruption better than the brown. that's remaining.

as for the slimes.. I can't do much about the slimes. to some people the red looks too red, and to some it looks brown. I'm not sure what to do about that. Similar arguments apply to all of them.

edit: I made an attempt at the slimes... not sure if it's much better
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as for the slimes.. I can't do much about the slimes. to some people the red looks too red, and to some it looks brown. I'm not sure what to do about that. Similar arguments apply to all of them.
It's like the blue and black shirt. Or is it white and gold?!
Jk.
 
that will take a ton of work, so not any time soon.
Yeah.
Fair enough.
I can see it being a bit better if you made it scaly.
But I can use my imagination.
 
I made a scaly one, may I post it, Scarecrow?
 
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