Qui Devorat's Poetic request bar.

excession said:
I'm enjoying your poetry so far, and I have a request based on the backstory of my character.
Excession was a normal Terrarian, until he and his friend were exploring in the corruption. They found a spring of corrupted water that would provide long life, but at the cost of turning them evil. Excession's friend betrayed him, and he got stuck under a pile of rubble with his arm laying in the pool. The pool was covered, so his friend left, but it sustained Excession, turning him into a demon. He eventually gathered enough energy to break free, and take revenge.
He is now thousands of years old, and still tries to fight for good, even though he has been corrupted.
Sorry if it is long, you don't have to do it if you don't want to however.
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Two mortals.
One time.
In a landscape
Far from sublime.
Heard from rumors
Of a mythical spring
A treacherous ploy
In one's head will ring.

So the fiend's idea hatched
Bringing the roof on him.
The false friend's malice
Sparked on a whim.
Of course with these acts,
The other's features were frayed
As his reborn form howled
That his debt must be payed.

Stuck in water
Trapped in a reflection
Popping up to observe those
giving the pool an inspection.
And one fateful day,
massing enough power
His shadow bloomed
Like an eldritch flower.
Hungry for blood.
And a purpose in life.
Of course his instincts
Making it full of strife.

He still haunts the earth
To this very day
From thousands of years ago
To find a purpose, if it may.
But being corrupted, of course?
That bit always shows.
For many have noticed his presence
As "An @excession of shadows."
 
Qui Devorat said:
Two mortals.
One time.
In a landscape
Far from sublime.
Heard from rumors
Of a mythical spring
A treacherous ploy
In one's head will ring.

So the fiend's idea hatched
Bringing the roof on him.
The false friend's malice
Sparked on a whim.
Of course with these acts,
The other's features were frayed
As his reborn form howled
That his debt must be payed.

Stuck in water
Trapped in a reflection
Popping up to observe those
giving the pool an inspection.
And one fateful day,
massing enough power
His shadow bloomed
Like an eldritch flower.
Hungry for blood.
And a purpose in life.
Of course his instincts
Making it full of strife.

He still haunts the earth
To this very day
From thousands of years ago
To find a purpose, if it may.
But being corrupted, of course?
That bit always shows.
For many have noticed his presence
As "An @excession of shadows."
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Holy :red:! That's freaking awesome! How do you... How...? How is...?
*Regains composure*
How did you do that, in like what, 20 minutes?!
 
I was working on my information.
Here is the most I can come up with.

About my OC, he is or was a powerful being of Terraria. He was Valarous, Dragon of Light. But he, like other gods, lost their powers. But he was one of the few to remain their sense of humanity and kindness. But his mind is fractured. Dakreas is the darker part of what was formerly Valarous. He represent the evil and chaos of the world. Shaedric is the lightest part of what was formely Valarous. There is neither Shaedric or Dakreas, but both.
 
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Dragon of the Shadows said:
I was working on my information.
Here is the most I can come up with.

About my OC, he is or was a powerful being of Terraria. He was Valarous, Dragon of Light. But he, like other gods, lost their powers. But he was one of the few to remain their sense of humanity and kindness. But his mind is fractured. Dakreas is the darker part of what was formerly Valarous. He represent the evil and chaosof the world. Shaedric is the lightest part of what was formely Valarous. There is neither Shaedric or Dakreas, but bot
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Bot.
They're bots?
Illuminati Confirmed.
 
Guardians of the air
Now rest down below.
One good, one evil
In their behavior it shows.
Split down the middle
Like a broken masterpiece
One Shaedric, One Dakreas
So far they do not cease
Edging forces of chaotic evil
Against order and good.
One thing can be said
Their places are understood.

But there used to be a greater entity.
Valarous, Dragon of Light
Now sadly he's too halves
Good on left, evil on right.
The centuries and eons beckon
For a time that they will fuse
As regardless what happens in the war
Neither side will win, neither lose.
 
Qui Devorat said:
Guardians of the air
Now rest down below.
One good, one evil
In their behavior it shows.
Split down the middle
Like a broken masterpiece
One Shaedric, One Dakreas
So far they do not cease
Edging forces of chaotic evil
Against order and good.
One thing can be said
Their places are understood.

But there used to be a greater entity.
Valarous, Dragon of Light
Now sadly he's too halves
Good on left, evil on right.
The centuries and eons beckon
For a time that they will fuse
As regardless what happens in the war
Neither side will win, neither lose.
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Thanks, that is really great!
 
My request:

Mad Keeper of Time and Space
The truth he had to face
The madness it then caused
The one thing that gave him pause
Ever flowing, he would find
An eternal cycle, there went his mind

A beloved character, Void was his name
A poem further describing the madness of his mind
An interpretation from you, of forum fame
Please, if you would be so kind

(This took a lot longer than I thought and I think I might be more than capable of doing this myself as evidenced by the first bit of this thing. Also, there is the whole thing I know this character better than you but I'm interested in, based on what I described there, what another person might make of this. If you need further knowledge on this character. Let me know. I'll provide.)

Poster Note: Welp... I guess my finger wanted to post this now and not think about this further. I accidentally hit post... what ever.
 
RoboTT said:
CAn you make one about salty crackers?
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So we all heard of crackers
But he likes the salt
The zingy flavour bringing
The worst things to a halt.
The delicious taste on the tongue
As it goes to the gut
Is a perfect answer for those
Looking to get out of a rut.
Now it stands on the shelves
A part of the larder.
Waiting for someone to grab it
When their life becomes harder.
 
Shadow_Mantis said:
My request:

Mad Keeper of Time and Space
The truth he had to face
The madness it then caused
The one thing that gave him pause
Ever flowing, he would find
An eternal cycle, there went his mind

A beloved character, Void was his name
A poem further describing the madness of his mind
An interpretation from you, of forum fame
Please, if you would be so kind

(This took a lot longer than I thought and I think I might be more than capable of doing this myself as evidenced by the first bit of this thing. Also, there is the whole thing I know this character better than you but I'm interested in, based on what I described there, what another person might make of this. If you need further knowledge on this character. Let me know. I'll provide.)

Poster Note: Welp... I guess my finger wanted to post this now and not think about this further. I accidentally hit post... what ever.
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The unfortunate soul
Whose madness has awoken
Has twisted a colourful mind
Into something broken.
His name was Void
But in his deranged core
I doubt even he
Knows his name anymore.
His roiling, chaotic mind
Has been taken a toll
By something that twisted
Into today's deranged soul.
 
Qui Devorat said:
The unfortunate soul
Whose madness has awoken
Has twisted a colourful mind
Into something broken.
His name was Void
But in his deranged core
I doubt even he
Knows his name anymore.
His roiling, chaotic mind
Has been taken a toll
By something that twisted
Into today's deranged soul.
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Actually pretty close to what happens with him.
 
please do a poem that's dark and bloody and :red:ing epic. One about a god of Death(or war) slaying billions of puny mortals. The request may be too epic for everyone, though.
 
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