Story Dylan and Steve
- Thread starter neoselket
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Essa20
Skeletron Prime
Thanks!
akrobeau
Skeletron Prime
LOL CHAPTER 7 1/2 xD
I loved the actual story too! Great work! But maybe at least skip to the next line when another person is saying something. Example: “Hi, Dylan,” said Steve.
“Hi, Steve,” replied Dylan.
More accurate guide:
There was a loud bang on the door. “Oh, someone knocked on the door! MUST BE THE PIZZA GUY!” Luke exclaimed. He walked over to the door and opened it. “Oops...”
The zombie ripped apart Steve and Dylan's limbs, then ripped out their brains. After the zombie was finished eating them, it walked over to Luke.
“Scream,” Luke screamed. The zombie brutally murdered Luke, and left the house with blood and dead corpses everywhere.
I loved the actual story too! Great work! But maybe at least skip to the next line when another person is saying something. Example: “Hi, Dylan,” said Steve.
“Hi, Steve,” replied Dylan.
More accurate guide:
There was a loud bang on the door. “Oh, someone knocked on the door! MUST BE THE PIZZA GUY!” Luke exclaimed. He walked over to the door and opened it. “Oops...”
The zombie ripped apart Steve and Dylan's limbs, then ripped out their brains. After the zombie was finished eating them, it walked over to Luke.
“Scream,” Luke screamed. The zombie brutally murdered Luke, and left the house with blood and dead corpses everywhere.
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Scarlet Hunter
Retinazer
Oh boy.
shiningterrapin
Terrarian
Yes! I was starting to wonder if it had been abandoned with the two month silence.
neoselket
Ice Queen
Nope! I was just too lazy to post.
shiningterrapin
Terrarian
Makes sense. Well, looking forward to continued content!
Robot Scout
Terrarian
Why as not alerted of this? This is amazing!
Drake katchadorian
Spazmatism
Hey what about chapter 14?
neoselket
Ice Queen
Good idea, i'll actually post that right now!
Drake katchadorian
Spazmatism
Yes thank you I've been waiting forever!
neoselket
Ice Queen
No problem! Thanks for the support, it means a lot to me.
Drake katchadorian
Spazmatism
Yeah its a great story. Will they make it to hard mode?
Drake katchadorian
Spazmatism
Maybe have them eventually find a snowball cannon.
neoselket
Ice Queen
Yep! I've got a rough idea for pretty much the entire playthrough, so they'll be doing a lot. As for the snowball cannon, who knows? I usually just write whatever strikes me at the time, so some of the plot twists even surprise me.
And the new chapter is up now, too.
Drake katchadorian
Spazmatism
Yeah I saw that. My world on PC is in ice so I have lots of ammo for it
FlamingFondue23
Terrarian
Please write more I read it in like an hour and am waiting for more
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